I would give this story a rating of five because it was really well written and I could imagine it in my head.
Setting- I could picture the setting for the story.I got a video clip of it happening in my head.
Characters-The characters are pretty easy to make come to life in your head. I however could not imagine these sort of characters in Tinwald School. I like how the author has told you heaps about the main characters without going over the top.
Language- Another thing that I like is that the author has used some interesting words to get the message across clearly. There were some words that I didn't know and have know learn't them.
Plot- I like that the problem is probably one that most people could relate to at least once. Though I wouldn't be so sure about the ending.